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CarolineLuize's avatar
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

hey, so i'm just going to critique your character.
what i really like about this piece is the colors, you have a real good eye when it comes to making your piece believable. all the colors you used are represented in your piece, which is good.
so, the issues i find are the expresion, the lines and the anatomy.
it's a real weird pose. since it's basically too close to the viewer.
if you put some houses behind her and maybe show more of her torso, zooming a bit out, her sadness could be brought out more.
you also should consider practicing the expressions and face anatomy.
it could be styalized but everyone has to learn that as an artist.

so that was my humble critique of your character, i hope it was fair
CaroLuize ♥