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original character : syreni
Program : clip studio pant
Tool : wacom bamboo pen
She is my love daughter
I hope you like this.
commissions here!!
Program : clip studio pant
Tool : wacom bamboo pen
She is my love daughter
I hope you like this.
commissions here!!
Commissions are open!
My Tablet is slowly broken .
So i have to find some money for buy a new one........
RULESStar Mood Icon by Gasara
• Be patient and respectful
• Please sent note with commission form to me.
• If i got your note i will sketch and sent it back to you
• If you want to edit you can tell me at this time.(Only 3 times)
• Until you are okay with sketch please pay money or point first and i will start work
• I will work it quickly!
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Comments4
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hey, so i'm just going to critique your character.
what i really like about this piece is the colors, you have a real good eye when it comes to making your piece believable. all the colors you used are represented in your piece, which is good.
so, the issues i find are the expresion, the lines and the anatomy.
it's a real weird pose. since it's basically too close to the viewer.
if you put some houses behind her and maybe show more of her torso, zooming a bit out, her sadness could be brought out more.
you also should consider practicing the expressions and face anatomy.
it could be styalized but everyone has to learn that as an artist.
so that was my humble critique of your character, i hope it was fair
CaroLuize ♥